The short film attempts to tell a story about old age, parenthood and familial ties. The narrative is about a family struggling with terminal illness of a member.
However, despite its sincerity and honesty, a weak edit of rough transitions and loose shots, along with unconvincing performances does not allow the film to work. Perhaps going back and taking a second look at the way the story is structured and executed would help this product, and those in the future by the team, achieve more.
Read LessHowever, despite its sincerity and honesty, a weak edit of rough transitions and loose shots, along with unconvincing performances does not allow the film to work. Perhaps going back and taking a second look at the way the story is structured and executed would help this product, and those in the future by the team, achieve more.
